Does my poem/lyrics lack emotion?

I always write with emotion I'n mind, it's how I get my emotion out,
my friend think this poem doesn't show emotion - is she right? How can
I add more?

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We'd start talking at the night,
And stay talking till it was bright,
Oh how and me you, would use that phone.
Our random summer walks,
In which we'd talk and talk,
It'd be hours until we each returned home

Wither things were bad or fine,
We'd stick together to the finish line.

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